3d printer as 

we know that every day a new invention is happening to make easy life, so now the 3d printer is coming into our life, this thing will be beneficial in our life so first, we know about the 3d printer. 3d printer is a type of thing that prints plastic types of things quickly but it will take plastic for making the things but it is not too good. 3d printer is very usefull for making toys, glasses, construction models in a physical way, and many things but we know mostly an invention finish the jobs.

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  1. Amisha SachdevaMay 16, 2022 at 8:35 AM

    objective,rising action, purpose.
    missing

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    1. ankitMay 16, 2022 at 8:43 AM

      I think its magazine that's why I did not write a climax.

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  2. AkshataMay 16, 2022 at 8:38 AM

    Hey your topic is invisible ink and you wrote it on 3D printer. Also if it is an advertisement so there should be some tag line or storyline which is missing. Also please work on Capitalization, punctuation, sentences structure and grammar.

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    1. Shruti MauryaMay 16, 2022 at 8:39 AM

      I think we can change our topic.

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    2. ankitMay 16, 2022 at 8:45 AM

      Yes sir told you can change your topic. that's why I have changed.

      Delete

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